The original composition for this page was so bland, I tried to improve it a bit, I think it’s a bit more appealing anyway.
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Halfway through chapter 1! I really like the improvements to this page, the change in the hair really makes it feel more dynamic and less flat.
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One of the other reoccurring changes I made with was Thanatos’ hair. I slowly changed the shape of the bangs (intentional!) and his fringe just seems to get fluffier and fluffier (unintentional!)
I’m really pleased with out the middle panel came out, especially. He looks so much cuter.
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One of the things I wanted to take advantage of with the coloring was to have a bit more fun with the Atra’novalis, and make it a lot more colorful when one has been activated.
Where did his sunglasses go…? I didn’t want to keep drawing them so let’s just say he tucked them in his pockets off screen.
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I was debating whether I should tag characters who aren’t on screen but are talking, or characters who are barely visible. In the end I decided yes, so Pandora gets a tag here, yay.
If you’re reading this for the first time, you don’t know who that is yet, so just put a pin in it for later.
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Lest anyone actually confuse me for a decent artist who knows what they’re doing, it took until today to realize I kept switching which side Remiel’s buttons were on. One thing you might notice in general is that I am terrible at keeping track of right and left. When I make mistakes like this, I usually update it here on the main website, but I usually don’t bother with all the mirror sites. When it comes to their dominant hand, just assume everyone’s ambidextrous, because there’s no way I’ll be able to keep track out it.
